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It is a beautiful world

You who would do anything to help your neighbor
Do you know if all are like that?
If all are like you, wouldn’t this world be an awesome place?
Or would it?
How does it look like to you?
Is it an extension of yourself?
Of so far apart
That you don’t even recognize it
Time for a fact check
You are the creator of your world
After God has made it
It will be how you are to others
If you see it is all rosy and beautiful
Because you are all so
And you made it so
It is an extension of yourself
Whether good or bad
Time for a remake
Change
You can only start with you
Recognize what needs to be changed
And ask Him to change it for you
You’ll thank yourself 
It is a beautiful world
And God has made it
He does not make mistakes
He makes good people
We change to how we like it
It’s time to go back to the Maker
And do a correction
Time for it
Absolute change
Yours

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  1. Date: 1/13/2013 5:43:00 PM

    I enjoyed your write this evening. Light & Love

    Harrell Avatar Toquyen Harrell Date: 1/13/2013 5:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My comment meant for Russell jumped, lol. Thanks, Debbie. Love ya, Toquyen
    Harrell Avatar Toquyen Harrell Date: 1/13/2013 5:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Russell. Love your great comment! Love ya, Toquyen
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 5:29:00 PM

    This is an outstanding write my friend! I loved how you said that we need to start with ourselves when we look for change, and to have the Lord do the correction in our lives! I truly loved reading this incredible and wondrous poem this evening! What a powerful message you have presented here within your write Toquyen!

    Harrell Avatar Toquyen Harrell Date: 1/13/2013 6:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Russell. The comment for you jumped :) Love your sweet comment! Love ya, Toquyen