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Totally Insane



Have you ever personally wondered If you're playing with a totally full deck? It may be that you just think you're normal And you really don't even suspect You're certain it's got to be everyone else That's just a little bit off centre It can't be you, you're totally sane In your mind that thought never entered Well, here's a news flash, me buckeroo! A wake up call I'm sending to you Those images swirling around in your brain They're not real, there's something askew! Believe me, I used to be totally insane Then got zapped between the eyes By a bolt of lightning that cleared my sinuses As well as all the sewers nearby! You may not be operating on all eight cylinders See a shrink before it's too late He surely can prescribe some strong medication So you won't go around half baked! Have you ever personally wondered If you're playing with a totally full deck? Here's a wake up call, me buckeroo Seems your train might have been in a wreck! © Jack Ellison 2012

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  1. Date: 1/12/2013 4:13:00 PM

    Ha ha, I don't know, has my mind really been in a wreck...it could be, I don't know...I could be insane too my friend! I truly loved reading this glorious and perfectly insane poem this evening! What a powerful tale with hard facts, I hope I've not lost my marbles!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 1/13/2013 7:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey! When it comes to insanity, I'm the guy with all the info! LOL
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 3:39:00 PM

    We are all completely different ....... as two snow crystals....(normal or not?) - Well written my friend. - Have a nice and enjoyable weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 1/13/2013 7:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are absolutely correct, my dear dear friend! And thank goodness for that eh! Love, Jack xox
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 10:02:00 AM

    AWWWW... But I like it like this... My Trolls do too... LOL

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 1/13/2013 7:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I think us two guys are taking this a little too far though!!! LOL
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 8:55:00 AM

    Guilty as charged! ;) I've written a piece on this topic! We all are a little crazy...just in different ways! Thanks for this humorous reminder! Great work! :)

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 1/12/2013 9:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You got it!!! None of us are totally sane! LOL Thanks dear friend for dropping by! Love and hugs, Jack
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 8:14:00 AM

    We are all a little bit insane. We act a certain way in our own ways. We are not like everyone else. We want things our ways though sometimes it does not seem logical. I can see your point, Jack. Have you heard the saying "do the same thing and expect a different results is insanity". We do that. There, your point :)

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 1/12/2013 8:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I think every single one of us is a little bit off centre! That's what makes us who we are! Have an amazing off centre day! LOL