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Is Love A Choice,Or A Mercy

Is Love A Choice,Or A Mercy?

Love unbosomed
Sweet joys seamless
Does 'Reality'frown?

Torments over,
We are our answers
Do we not have a choice?

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  1. Date: 1/27/2013 4:57:00 PM

    good questions. I think you are new? I will go see another poem of yours.

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/28/2013 11:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Andrea....glad you liked it....
  1. Date: 1/15/2013 8:30:00 PM

    This is a good question. In my opinion it is both. Good poem - JH

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/28/2013 11:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for the visit...
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 2:12:00 PM

    powerful poetry this is...excellent...

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/28/2013 11:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you....
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 7:22:00 AM

    Well questioned Mehnaz! The idea of love as a Mercy appeals to me - love embodies kindness and forgiveness - it is a balm to those broken. Very well written!

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/28/2013 11:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Vicky....
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 2:14:00 AM

    Hi Mehnaz thanks for your comment, and I think it,s actually a gift but thats just me, hope that helps, all the best Owen

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/12/2013 2:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you and good luck...
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 5:13:00 PM

    I am so pleased to see you try out my Questionku. Great job, the last line should be six sylables. suggestion: First stanza remove "why" from line 3. Stanza 2 perhaps try " do we not have a Choice?" This is one of the best 1st attempts I have seen for this new form, you are a natural.

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/12/2013 2:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I have modified this questionku according to your suggestions...thanks for your suggestions and approval...Mehnaz
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 5:04:00 PM

    Introspective poetry, It makes one stop to think, thank you for sharing hope you have a nice evening, thank you for your kind visit on my poetry, xxx

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/12/2013 2:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for stopping by....
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 3:34:00 PM

    I enjoyed your write this evening. Light & Love

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/11/2013 4:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Debbie for stopping by