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Only but a season

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Only but a season

Why, why my Juliette,
why does your heart slumber?
What spell has my sleeping beauty
been put under?
Awake! Arise as the sun
thats everdawning
for when the sun sets in the east
the west awaits it morning.

Come, radiate your smile
across the landscapes of my heart
and let me behold your beauty,
Gods precious work of art
For too long we have been seperated
by thunderclouds and rain
that strike into my longing soul
and shower me with pain . . .

How comforting the memories
of precious days of old,
kept frozen in this winter
as love is left . . . to a lonely cold

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  1. Date: 2/4/2013 8:37:00 AM

    Congratulations Naideem xx

    Bout Avatar Naldeem Bout Date: 2/5/2013 3:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you, its your appreciation for poetry that kindles up the flame in me :).naldeem
  1. Date: 2/4/2013 7:39:00 AM

    I would have placed this higher..its has a lovely ring to it. congrats. BG

    Bout Avatar Naldeem Bout Date: 2/5/2013 3:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you kindly, im grateful that you like it God bless
  1. Date: 2/3/2013 10:54:00 PM

    congrats Naldeem on your win in my contest

    Bout Avatar Naldeem Bout Date: 2/5/2013 3:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you, im honored and greatly respct the fact that there is a platform for us poets, where I live to hear the word poet seems a joke(especially if your a guy0 but ive learnt to love not what I do but who I am, and a poet i will always be. i hope to have written a book while travelling to distant places and meeting new acquaintances where i go. than you again i truelly am grateful :)
  1. Date: 2/3/2013 10:09:00 PM

    Naldeem, Congratulations with your wonderful poem ~ Always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 7:34:00 PM

    Naldeem Bout, stopping by to say hi ;-) and welcome you to this lovely soup bowl. My name is Linda; everyone here calls me PD for fun. I'm here reading and enjoying new poets to love, appreciate and adore. (And make friends with:-) Please do not hesitate to look me up here on the soup if you need feedback on your poetry. I am looking forward to following your poems as you grow and post here at the POETRY SOUP. Take care~ LUV *LINDA

    Bout Avatar Naldeem Bout Date: 1/22/2013 3:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you PD, its certainly a pleasure. looking forward to reading more your work ;)