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Be My Valentine

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Be My Valentine

To call a rose by any other name
Could never do justice to you
To see you name there in the frame
Makes my heart go out to you…

A rose as fair, perfumed to perfection
The palest yellow petals that glow
Make my heart beat as though with infection
My temperature it raises so.

So Mystic lady I ask you this one time
If I were a boy, rich, strong and tall
Would you then be my valentine?
And we can leave now, and sod them all.

©  10/01/2013
 Entry for Mystic Roses' contest: Be my Valentine

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  1. Date: 1/12/2013 10:20:00 AM
    hmmmmmm,, nice poem Mandy...

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 3:59:00 AM
    Is that a little bit soon for a valentine? Ha-ha! Cleverly written. Nice work, like it!

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 9:54:00 PM
    This is good Mandy. Thank you for sharing. Lucilla

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 1/11/2013 1:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Bit of fuxn Lucilla x
  1. Date: 1/10/2013 6:56:00 PM
    very clever how you made it to mystic lady!!! This was so cute, Mandy.

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 1/11/2013 1:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Her contest Andy lol xx
  1. Date: 1/10/2013 4:59:00 PM
    Mandy,,, nice,,pd

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    Date: 1/11/2013 1:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks pd xx
  1. Date: 1/10/2013 4:20:00 PM
    Ugg, it's Valentine already? I'll be your Valentine, Mandy :) Great poem!

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 1/11/2013 1:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ok Toquyen , love lol xx