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  1. Date: 2/14/2013 9:30:00 PM

    Joann, love the kimo.... very deep...pd

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 10:57:00 PM

    wow, this is GREAT!!!

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 9:16:00 AM

    I like this. Try tio make one dream at a time, become real. God bless you.Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 1:03:00 PM

    WOOOW ...... it was well written!! - You are clever my friend !!!!! - oxox// Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 9:48:00 AM

    The last line is amazing! I have never read a kimo before, but I really love this one! Great job :)

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 9:56:00 PM

    You have said a lot in just three short lines. Good write.

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 4:59:00 PM

    This reminds me to check my bucket list and maybe do something on it. Nice right. cheri

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 11:23:00 AM

    EMPTY IT LOL,FULL IT WITH HAPPY DREAMS,NICE WRITE JOANN

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 4:44:00 AM

    Stunning, my friend - Tim

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 8:33:00 PM

    This is more than beautiful, deep and very thought provoking lines Joann. The way you have sketched these empty dreams it has touched everyone's empty dreams. Great lines my friend touching and reminding us the realities of life. I am a little busy because of my son's marriage ceremony due to take place on 6th Feb 2013 and after that I will complete some of my incomplete series. Hope you are fine. Love and best wishes..Ravindra..

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 4:50:00 PM

    I love coin jars ;) I have quater in a tin that looks like a shoe and dimes in a tin that looks like a Brit post box LOL [nickles and pennies inside a wood duck!] Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 10:57:00 AM

    Gosh this says a lot in just a few short lines. cool xx

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:26:00 AM

    OOOOOH!! Strong! Knocked my socks off!....and i was wearing SHOEOOOOZ!!! This is Awesome ...GrippinG! What does 'Kimo' stand for...Kimo sabe? Kimona! Don't know this form...sorry for my behavior here...I'mm Manic depressive ...Guesss what I yams taday?

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 6:41:00 AM

    nice...

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 6:01:00 PM

    nice one!

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 1:05:00 PM

    My shelf has a Christmas box over flowing with papers. My poetry.

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 12:59:00 PM

    This is a powerful short verse my friend! I thoroughly enjoyed this incredibly insightful poem! What an awesome piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 10:35:00 AM

    enjoyed your short, straightforward poem today