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In Your Eyes

When you gaze at me. Its like a story has just begun. I feel the fairytale getting started. Those magical feelings. With those twinkle in your eyes. You make me fall for you. Its like love in the air. Without any sound made. Its love in the air. You make me feel like a star. Though am far from you, I can see you right there. Your eyes still gaze at me. Searching for something that is still left. But I found it. I found it in your eyes.

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  1. Date: 2/17/2013 5:12:00 PM

    Congrats, Asma. Nice going. xxxRalph

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 5:10:00 AM

    - A well-written Valentine poem, it had to win! - CONGRATULATIONS, ASMA !! <3 - Have a beautiful Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 10:54:00 PM

    Congratulations my dear Asma for your very lovely write and fantastic win! I enjoyed reading your great Valentines poem! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 6:01:00 PM

    congrats on your win Asma

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 3:33:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 3:26:00 PM

    Congratulations on your fine win, Asna!

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 2:15:00 PM

    Asma, CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your lovely and wonderful poem. always & forever *LINDA

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 3:16:00 PM

    soothing and loving this write is, much enjoyed...~always & forever~PD

    khan Avatar asma khan Date: 1/13/2013 8:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks PD :)
  1. Date: 1/10/2013 10:02:00 AM

    Asma, thank you for your beautiful poem! - Love it. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    khan Avatar asma khan Date: 1/13/2013 8:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks! :)