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Ring on my foot

Seren Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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Ring on my foot

Oh my feet are cold I grumbled as I sat upon the floor
Head upon his lap as I hear him quietly snore

I looked upon his face as though seeing for the first time
Worries, not a trace, cant say the same of mine

Asked myself the question,  is this face i want to see
Each morning as i wake up will this pleasure me

Thought of all his good deeds,  the way he takes control
In an emergency,not by half measures but by whole

Wonder if i turn around, put my feet on his chest
They will get warmer,  shall i put it to the test

So i did, not a pretty site,  sitting on my bum with feet looking white
Slowly he rubbed them ,put them next to his body for heat

So the answer to my question,  is yes i think i can
Wake up each morning,  looking at this man

Now i am laughing because when he rubbed my feet, I can see he
Placed a ring upon them , now he is  asking  to marry me.

Any man that  can put up with feet this cold must love me so
Of course I  said Yes  he was the one for me, but God called him home.



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  1. Date: 1/11/2013 12:12:00 PM
    what a sad romance Seren xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/11/2013 1:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    the romance was great , but as you know the ending is a painful memory..But they say time is a healer and being here on Soup with a friend like yourself and the boys who look after me here lol is good. Seren
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 11:36:00 AM
    Hi Seren what a way to propose, loved this veyr good, all the best Owen

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/11/2013 11:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes it was Owen but just memories now...Seren
  1. Date: 1/10/2013 4:23:00 AM
    Seren this is romantically sad, I like a lot...David soup mail

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/10/2013 9:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you David......
  1. Date: 1/10/2013 3:53:00 AM
    A very beautiful poem/couplet you've penned my dear friend Seren. So enjoyed! Thank you so much for sharing, your precious time stopping by leaving me your warm congratulatory comments. Have a great day! love always, Leonora

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/10/2013 9:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Leonora glad you liked my poem, thank you for stopping by .....Seren
  1. Date: 1/10/2013 3:49:00 AM
    oh such sadness, Seren,, but the good times together comes through here amazingly... through that you bring us the reader a lot of joy, yet one can see the sincerity the love that you did lose,, and with you share in your sentiment....

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/10/2013 9:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Harry, it helps to share, good and bad times. .......Seren