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My Valentine

My valentine's a star above
that leaves me all alone.
It seems to know I'm happier
when left upon my own.

At night it sparkles brightly
and holds me to my stare.
My eyes left feeling helpless
as my lungs are filled with air.

My valentine's a star above
as faithfull as I've known.
But not for being a wonderer;
for aligning God's own throne.

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  1. Date: 1/9/2013 8:22:00 PM

    This reminds me of the poem Bright Star written by John Keats. Bright star if I were as steadfast as thou art... Good poem - JH

    McLeod Avatar Trevor McLeod Date: 1/9/2013 10:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I just read Bright Star. I'm glad you mentioned it. He writes about his relationship with the star never sleeping. I have to wonder what gave him the idea. It was a great poem with great flowery language. Thanks for pointing it out. Trevor