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Whats Wrong Here

Whats wrong here?It bothers me our countrymen headed out to sea,to fight a war in which i dont understand.I'm hearing all over it was already pre planed.And for what?must i ask for resources of oil will deplete itself.While beutifull people are put on a shelf.And once we all die what will you do then?We love our life and ask forgiveness of our sins.There is only one god he's without a name he has no body unfathomable is more sane.For to put a name to god so lightly with the name of a man is guilty of treason to the most highly.

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  1. Date: 1/9/2013 12:33:00 PM

    Nice bit of naritive poetry here, so relevant. thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 11:40:00 AM

    Very strong feeling and so much meaning. Nice job Richard.

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 10:54:00 AM

    Interesting verse in narrative form ;) Light & Love