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Frozen Tear

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Frozen Tear

                                       Frozen Tear 
         A teardrop formed at the brim of the eye so brown
             Captured in them rainbows like morning dew
           reflecting dimensions of a life lived out long and lone. 
         Persevering prayers  answered, mercy bestowed ,finally due
     The teardrop  frozen forever,Lord Almighty does that to just a few.

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  1. Date: 1/10/2013 11:51:00 AM

    Profound and powerful poem!

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/12/2013 2:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Vesna ....
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 7:59:00 PM

    Mehnaz Veetil , i like the way you painted a deep image ,, a tear forming from the core..that image is one of a kind.. I like the way you paint the entire feeling and moment of a life time... always~ LINDA

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/8/2013 9:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you , Linda... So happy to see u here. Love n hugs, Mehnaz
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 6:45:00 PM

    Very nice concept for an excellent write. Light & Love

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/10/2013 4:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You, Debbie