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Its still here

This buzzing sound i 
hear
Is it far or near?
Surely isn't musical 
I swing my hands in the 
air
Almost hitting myself
It seems to have 
disappeared 
No no its still here 
somewhere

This creepy sound I fear
Is it out there or in here?
Surely it isn't a night 
magical 
I'm forced into the cold 
harmattan air
Light in my hand I peer 
as far as I dare 
It seems to have 
disappeared
No no its still here 
somewhere

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  1. Date: 1/26/2013 10:48:00 AM

    Is it not the buzzing of silence? Wonderful poem. Thanks for reading my write and for your kind comment. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 12:04:00 AM

    That buzzing sound you hear,I hear also...ha ha...Nice write.At least I know I'm not alone..

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 5:26:00 PM

    Nice featured poem~SKAT

    Ikyembe Avatar Iveren Ikyembe Date: 1/22/2013 11:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks!
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 9:23:00 AM

    Iveren Ikyembe, :-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself a lovely Sunday.... always & forever *LINDA

    Ikyembe Avatar Iveren Ikyembe Date: 1/22/2013 11:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 2:25:00 PM

    Welcome to the soup. "This buzzing sound I hear" the one still here somewhere. Is very familiar for me at times. I can identify with this poem.

    Ikyembe Avatar Iveren Ikyembe Date: 1/14/2013 6:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Really glad to hear that. Thanks
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 2:20:00 AM

    Hi Iveren welcome to the soup, could be a fly, but whatever very good write, I like it, all the best Owen

    Ikyembe Avatar Iveren Ikyembe Date: 1/12/2013 6:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Owen
  1. Date: 1/10/2013 12:43:00 PM

    Kind of reminds me of mosquito filled nights in Northern Ontario. Welcome to the Soup. I hope you enjoy your time here.