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one to one contest

On my own
Is the name of a song
i walk that path
It is a sad one

No one to hold
No lips to kiss
No one to share
A time of bliss

Love is the theme
I need to share
Reach out to touch
No one is there

What should I do
To find such a friend
To share the joys
That this life brings

I need to smile
My face to light up
Love in my eyes
A kiss on my lips

I look to the sky
Please I beg you
Send me my wish
So one can be two.

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  1. Date: 2/1/2013 2:45:00 AM

    When I commented before I didn't realize this was for the contest...VERY difficult thing to do but you pulled it off very nicely - Congrats, my friend...

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 9:30:00 PM

    Seren, a very nice win in David's "one to one" contest~ :-) PD

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 9:58:00 AM

    This is such a sweet poem. Congrats on your HM! Well deserved! :)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/28/2013 1:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Heather....Seren
  1. Date: 1/27/2013 11:31:00 PM

    Wish for happiness and you will have it all. Kudos on your win!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/28/2013 1:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I wish for many things, lol i think they have all got muddled up somewhere.....Seren
  1. Date: 1/27/2013 3:13:00 PM

    congrats on your HM Seren

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/28/2013 1:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Joseph ......Seren
  1. Date: 1/27/2013 1:07:00 PM

    There is such a melancholy feel to this lovely poem.........and all done with one word stanzas!! Well done!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/28/2013 2:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello Cartie nice to see you. nice to have a HM. am pleased....Seren
  1. Date: 1/27/2013 12:54:00 PM

    Congratulations on your HM, Seren. Love, Su

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/28/2013 2:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Suzette.....Seren
  1. Date: 1/27/2013 12:37:00 PM

    congratulations seren....

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/28/2013 2:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Mehnaz
  1. Date: 1/27/2013 12:19:00 PM

    Seren congrats on your HM, I hope you get your wish....David

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/28/2013 2:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    What will be will be Dafydd .......Seren
  1. Date: 1/10/2013 12:09:00 AM

    Seren this is sheer magic.. "I need to smile" that stanza is amazing.. you are bringing heaps of happiness here to soup with these wonders... hope that makes you happy too

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/15/2013 7:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Harry I am fine.....Seren
  1. Date: 1/9/2013 10:24:00 PM

    Sorry I am seeing these so late, Seren. I like this one a lot. Now let me see this other one you are wondering about.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/9/2013 10:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for stopping and commentng ...Seren
  1. Date: 1/9/2013 1:34:00 PM

    Serene - I see just one in this one as well. One syllable and one train of thought - that one would be better as two. Maybe the nexst contest will be only two syllable words - now, that you have mastered this one. Good job. Joe

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/9/2013 2:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Joe i wrote two of them if you care to look at my one to one two didnt know which to enter lol.
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 6:18:00 PM

    I echo these words.. !! Touched my heart !! Best of luck for the contest. An interesting challenge he put forth, but you did an excellent job !!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/8/2013 6:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Debra, was fun trying to use just one syllable words, muttered a bit under my breadth as well lol...Seren
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 3:50:00 PM

    You rose to the challenge and conquered with this amazing write! I truly loved reading this lovely and harmonious poem this afternoon! What an outstanding and stupendous piece, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/8/2013 4:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    conquer is a strong word Russell... scraped through is more appropriate lol ...Seren
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 3:26:00 PM

    Tough job but an excellent one .... Loved and enjoyed reading ....love , Mehnaz

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/8/2013 4:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Mehnaz .....Seren
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 2:46:00 PM

    What a lovely write, Seren! You had a challenge in using one syllable words and you rose to the occasion in s style! I hope your wish comes true! I enjoyed reading this so very much. God bless!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/8/2013 4:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thx Eileen, its rather strange having to think around using more than one syllable...Seren
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 2:12:00 PM

    You did a great job with this contest Seren, it isn't an easy one to do, I hope your wish comes true my dear, and I hope ye sends you a beautiful soul to adore, so you can cross that bride with a smile on your face, and a song in your heart hugs xxx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/8/2013 4:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thx Rose, my time will come hun, no rush, lol but the next 5 minutes would be nice.....Seren
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 2:04:00 PM

    Love the beautiful simplicity of this, Seren...no wasted words... the song 'On my own' makes me weak in the knees every time I hear it - Tim

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/8/2013 2:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hello Tim. This contest i could only use one syllable words, not so easy. Yes i love that song also. Thanks for stopping and commenting...Seren