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Sleep and dream

When I fall asleep I’ll chant your name to the dark And dream of your breath

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  1. Date: 1/25/2013 8:39:00 AM

    well, I am back to where I had left off. I had said this one was enchanting and I will add, beautiful now.

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 7:32:00 PM

    Enchanting!!

    West Avatar Rollo West Date: 1/8/2013 10:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello dear friend, thank you for your comments. Rollo
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 5:39:00 PM

    dear poet Rollo,, very deep hearfelt...so sweet...enjoyed so very much :) thank you for sharing <3 SK

    West Avatar Rollo West Date: 1/8/2013 10:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much for stopping by and commenting. Rollo
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 2:58:00 PM

    this is enchanting Rollo, an excellent Senryu

    West Avatar Rollo West Date: 1/8/2013 10:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Harry, thank you so much for commenting. Rollo
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 6:33:00 AM

    If only........Seren. Great write Rollo

    West Avatar Rollo West Date: 1/8/2013 10:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello Seren, thank you so much for stopping by. Rollo
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 12:35:00 AM

    And the beauty that her breath entertains within the darkness! I really loved reading this delightful and harmonious poem this evening! What a powerful image you paint within this masterful piece here Rollo! Awesome Work!!

    West Avatar Rollo West Date: 1/8/2013 10:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello my dear friend, thank you so much for stopping by and your great comment. Rollo
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 11:25:00 PM

    Oh, I wish someone I know would do that, lol. Love it, Rollo :)

    West Avatar Rollo West Date: 1/7/2013 11:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ho oquyen, thank you so much for stopping by. Rollo