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BOX 4

BOX (4)

I let the voice 
recognize the box
but it sits opposite me
		chewing my echo.

I stare around.
	I am inside it.
The echo bounces against its walls
piercing my ear 
like an earring.

My voice giggles into tears
and stands here
	stuck, to remind me
	that the box is stifling me
	the more I grow
	inside it.
 

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  1. Date: 1/9/2013 6:47:00 PM

    Welcome to poetry soup! Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 7:00:00 AM

    Hi there and welcome to the site, I hope you enjoy it here.

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 3:34:00 PM

    I like the imagery-- The echo bounces against its walls piercing my ear like an earring nicely done.... nice to meet you!

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 12:23:00 PM

    Vanja, welcome to P-Soup. - You write very well. - Hope you will get much pleasure to share your thoughts and poems here with us. - Happy new year. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)