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to she who must be obeyed

A very special love I craved
It just appeared I had not prayed
The upper class the highest grade
Back and forth with words we played
Sincere was my heart with commitment made
My thoughts and desires are daily paid
Hopes to please with eloquent praise
To the one who's feet my love I laid

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  1. Date: 2/5/2013 1:55:00 PM

    Awesome write you have here John,,, thank you 4 reading Tudor Court", I don't have freckles,, that means I'm not a redhead LOL ;} have a great day ;}

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 7:53:00 AM

    this is nice John , very romantic xx

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 3:43:00 PM

    So nice to read your work this evening john I hope all's well. Light & love

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 4:49:00 PM

    Everyone mind is turning to love..me I now have a chest cold grrr..:0 Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 1:07:00 PM

    A very moving romantic poem. thank you for comments on my poems. If you have a great number of poems, publish a book.

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 4:01:00 PM

    the most special love appears when we least expect it...

    loving iii Avatar john loving iii Date: 1/10/2013 1:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Boo
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 8:48:00 PM

    This is beautiful, JL! My very best wish for this New Year! Thanks for the visit and yes, I fall into that category of procrastinators...sometimes. Annalise

    loving iii Avatar john loving iii Date: 1/8/2013 10:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thas why I don't have a book.
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 12:53:00 PM

    Beautiful verse John, xxxx