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Pumpkin Cake

There once was a girl from Arizona
Who could only fit in a kimona
She vowed to lose some weight
But loved all kinds of cake
Even drawn by pumpkin cake's aroma  

She vowed that she would be stronger
Would wear kimonos no longer
With cotton up her nose
From the table arose
Now in leggins she does saunter


Sponsor: Gwendolin R.
Contest:A Limerick In My Pocket

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  1. Date: 1/28/2013 10:57:00 PM

    once again here to read this .... enjoy your wonderful creativity in this simple theme...

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 7:28:00 PM

    The cotton up the nose trick really worked well for the girl in your limerick!! Such a fun entertaining entry...All limericks should be like this one, Sara!! Creative genius! Congrats. gwendolen

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 3:17:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 11:26:00 PM

    yours is a gas, Sara!!! congrats!

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 10:38:00 AM

    Very nice Limerick here Sara.Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 8:38:00 AM

    Good morning Sara, :-) ~ congratulations with the awesome win in Rix's "A Limerick in My Pocket Contest " contest. xox~pd

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 7:37:00 AM

    Congratulations Sara, a nice chuckle with these. xx

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 8:35:00 AM

    This is nice Sara; I like it. Around Thanksgiving - I love to have some pumpkin cake. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 4:48:00 AM

    For a super limerick Sara ...... who can resist delicious cakes. - It is a winning poem, good luck. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 10:37:00 PM

    Nice little double limerick. Just one item needs correction: "loose" should be "lose". What you have there now means running around freely or not tightened.

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 7:06:00 AM

    This Is a write that sort of got sparse Toward the end Sara; or i'm guessing That the dieter did.. L O L)) enjoyed My visit here.." Joe..)

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 7:01:00 PM

    Hmm... I like pumpkin cake as well as this poem. Good limerick you have here

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 12:43:00 PM

    Hi Sara like this limerick very much made me smile thanks for that, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 12:00:00 PM

    ‡ I Knew A Very Beautiful Girl In High School Whom Was Joyful Yet A Bit Plump So To Speak, Sweet Beautiful Sara ˜ I Did Not See Her Precious Heart During Summer's Vacation Following The 9th Grade ˜ Three Months Later She Returned To School Our Sophmore Year And Had Shed Many Pounds And Was So Absolutely Stunningly Beautiful ˜ Inside, She Had Always Been A Treasure Amid Love's Light ˜ Wonderful Painting And I Love Pumpkin Pie ˜ My Love, Forever & Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 11:10:00 PM

    Lol, so that's how she diets? Enjoyed, Sara. Good luck in the contest :)

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 5:54:00 PM

    VERY CLEVER, Sara. I love the wit of this one!!!

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 1:34:00 PM

    This is such a brilliant and wondrous write my friend! I really loved reading this delightful and enlightening poem this afternoon! You have presented a great pair of Limericks Sara, fantastic poems! Awesome Work!!

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 12:49:00 PM

    : )Now you've made me want a taste of pumpkin cake, Sara! Enjoyed your Limerick! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 9:17:00 AM

    Thank you for the… cake, Sara, it’s delicious! Lovely limerick, enjoyed a lot!

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 8:46:00 AM

    Sara a nice limerick. Ii loved "With cotton up her nose" clever. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 8:30:00 AM

    Very nice Sara.Enjoyed this Limerick.Best wishes to you.