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Magic spells

When I call you in a dream

Hear what I have to say

As hot blood runs through my vein

Do not turn your heart away

In the exile of your soul

let the midnight stars shine bright

let my arms be a warm pillow

in the dark thought of the night

Let the magic of believers

be the shadow on your wall

Let this whisper in your ear

keeps you coming back for more

When I call you in a dream

from the breeze upon the shore

Leave your window slightly open

Fly with me forevermore












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  1. Date: 5/12/2013 9:36:00 AM

    This left me wanting more and I was sad to see it end. The last couple lines really intrigued me with "the slightly open window". A sure fine way to end it with that sense of awe and wonder. Great poem!

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 2:15:00 AM

    Awesome,,,, going to favorites ;}

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 12:34:00 PM

    Enchanting, I feel lifted up.

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 4:52:00 PM

    love the feeling and emotion here well wriiten and said thank you for your kind words xx davidscott

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 9:26:00 AM

    I'll put a candle in my window.

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 12:19:00 PM

    "In the exile of your soul." Wonderful depth. I adore this one, Char. Love, daver

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 7:01:00 PM

    ............................ ‡ Hello, Sweet Beautiful Precious Charmaine ˜ 'Fly With Me Forevermore.' ˜ I Love That As Also This Beautiful Enchanting Poem And Twas The Reason I Returned Unto Its Magical Mesmerizing Splendours, To Thank You For Your Kind Sweet Visit; Sooo Beautiful! ˜ A Pure White Dove, Tis What I Think Of When I Think Of, 'You.' ˜ Stay Beautiful And Have A Wonderful Day As Evening ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, Rachel *

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 7:49:00 PM

    I like your sentiments - but there are typos in this poem which you should correct. It has happened to me,too Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 4:49:00 AM

    wonderful invitation, wonderful poetry,, love this Charmaine

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 9:31:00 AM

    Absolument fantastique! Absolutely fantastic!

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 2:28:00 PM

    very very well writen. one of your best! it captured me all the way to the end. going to my favs.

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 9:57:00 AM

    Intriguing write... great imagery and build up.

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 11:37:00 AM

    Very beautifully written... Loved it!

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 4:22:00 AM

    A magical poem... just love it... Terry

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 3:59:00 AM

    Charma I just love this....David

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 8:46:00 PM

    Charma, a very free-feeling lovely poem... the passion behind your pen, will make them all fly with you forevermore... thank you for the hi, it means a lot to me... always your friend... PD

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 6:32:00 PM

    Your paintings in pen are always warm and wonderful, friend ...jimbo

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 5:40:00 PM

    Charma a wonderful poem you've written. The title fits it very well. The words flowed beautifully and an excellent rhyme as well. Warm lies, Connie

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 3:05:00 PM

    Wow, I really like this one - JH

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 2:51:00 PM

    soupmail.

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 3:04:00 PM

    lovely and a delight to read ,~always & forever~PD

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 3:50:00 AM

    Delightful poetry Charma, a joy to read this fine day :) xx

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 9:16:00 PM

    The magic's working! : ) You've found your muse again, Charmaine. Im "enraptured" by this beauty! Great work. Ruben.

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 1:51:00 PM

    I am… spellbound! How anyone could resist such a magic call. MAGICAL! Thank you for sharing

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 12:44:00 PM

    You are a Premiere Poetess on this site!! And You honor me...When you drop by mine.... This Piece is typical of you...ABSOLUTELY AWESOME!!!

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 11:49:00 AM

    Hi Charma lovely words here I find to inspire me to attain such a goal in my life, all thebest Owen

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 7:46:00 AM

    Magical and beautiful!

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 5:52:00 AM

    A lovely read of this poem. Recapturing a dreamer's feat to win a love from an illusion to a reality. (^_^)

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 5:10:00 AM

    Lovely and sweet ......... really a nice poem Charma. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 1:33:00 AM

    Charma, love this, it flows very well, how on earth did you know it was my birthday?....Dave

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