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By The Light Of The Moon

Just give me that opportunity;
Let me have my every desire.
If you do want you and me, 
I'll play along until I find her.

Are you my greatest sin?
Am I to suffer yet another loss?
Are you my tragedy with paper and pen,
My dark secret of lonely hearts?

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  1. Date: 1/8/2013 8:00:00 PM

    I enjoy the flow of this one and the sweet message within it.

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 3:15:00 PM

    I love the title of this poem, reads like light splayed across the midnight sky, enjoyed xxx

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 1:00:00 PM

    Well..I have had my own tragedy with paper and pen, we fell out big time :) anyway I'm sure it will all work out in the end, so cheer up, enjoyed your write love Elizabeth

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 11:39:00 AM

    Some deep thoughts for a sunny day.Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 4:38:00 AM

    ‡ If There's Pure Made Love, Then How Could It Be Wrong ? Hello Dear Beautiful JH, I Really Like Your Profound In Searching The Heart's Verse; Cool Lines ˜ Many Of The Most Memorable As Beautiful Moments In Love's Union, Are Its Incubation Days Of Yesss, You Are Beautiful! ˜ Thank You For Your Kind Lovely Visit ˜ Love Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 11:38:00 PM

    Wooww,"Are you my tragedy with paper and pen" this is my favorite verse, really enjoyed it so much :)