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My Sweet Past Tone

Once you filled the room which hollow for a moment
Couples of days before new year eve we indirectly met
Hilarious to remember how we know and admire each other that day
Without knowing it won't last forever

One song... One song keep chanting me back to the memory of you
The song of blue sky collapse
Year goes by, first, second and more
Each of my story buried you without trace

Until today you seek me through the mailbox
Simple words as "happy birthday" and more words as "still think about you"
Surprised, touched, even mine still one more day to go
You missed the day, but you caught my yearn

Thousands words would I type to reply
But the fact my hands stoned
I missed you even more, sealed beyond these words
But don't know how to say nor expressed it through the blank page

Once you filled this hollow room
Once I ever loved you
But I found my better way... better life...
And decide not to look back

January 7, 2013
Dedicated to the person who ever dwell within the past of my sweet memory...

Author's Note:
If you want this poem to be perfect to be read, I suggest you to open this link; https://soundcloud.com/adhitiasofyan/blue-sky-collapse 
"Blue Sky Collapse - Adhitia Sofyan" and hear it along while you read this poem, this is my favorite song and I drown already :)

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  1. Date: 1/8/2013 6:58:00 PM
    So nice to read your work this evening. Light & Love

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/8/2013 9:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Debbie :), nice to have a comment by you too :)
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 12:20:00 PM
    Hi Yanny I think it's fine as it is lovely write, all the best Owen

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/8/2013 3:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Owen :D
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 8:34:00 AM
    Lovely, lovely, lovely! What an exceptional piece. This one is going to my favorites Yanny. Happy Birthday Yanny. How old are you? Hugs Rick.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/8/2013 8:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Rick, hehee, i'm entering 27 years old today :D, glad that you like the poem :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 10:29:00 PM
    Yanny...sometimes it is better to live with the memories than with the person. I feel your words. Thanks for stopping by my "Just for love". One love. Joy Wells.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/7/2013 10:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Joy, great to see you here :D
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 5:57:00 PM
    You have painted a wondrous picture and really have a splendid memory of this individual! I truly loved reading this inspirational poem this evening! You brought to me a special feeling from your write, Awesome Work here!!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/7/2013 6:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Russell glad that you inspired by it :), pleasure to have you here too :D
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 5:44:00 PM
    this sounds like someone that will live forever in your memory a very treasured friendship. Boy or girlfriend, I am not sure. But very heartfelt.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/7/2013 6:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, Andrea funny to say, that the song which I shared above becoming me and my husband favourite song :D, he just like the peace of tone which is so relaxing, try to listen if you have some time :)
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 7:46:00 AM
    Miraculous Yanny, lol, thanks for sharing this. I had a similar experience a couple of days back. :-) Love/hugs. Mehnaz

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/7/2013 8:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wow, hopefully you could pass through it :D moving on is not an easy part ;)
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 5:27:00 AM
    Beautiful, Yanny. I don't like sad memories. I try not to have any. Love it!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/7/2013 4:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hehehe, me too Toquyen, I tried not to remember it but somehow it keeps coming :D, glad to have you here Toquyen, wishing you a great and wonderful day :D
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 3:12:00 AM
    A beautiful poem of memories past. Wishing you the very best for the future.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/7/2013 3:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Jon, you too , wishing you all the best for the future, cheers for the future :D
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 1:23:00 AM
    Well written!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/7/2013 1:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Vesna, glad to see your presence here :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 1:23:00 AM
    residual feelings are always there...but moving on takes strength. cheers.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/7/2013 1:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Agree with that Michael, moving on is not an easy part, cheers to you too :D
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 12:38:00 AM
    nicely done - JH

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/7/2013 1:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks J.H :D wishing you great and wonderful day :) -hug, yanny