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SUNRISE

SUNRISE 

                                          

                                          While
                           The peaks of mountains
              Are wearing the crown of sunrise with grace
                   Bellow the valleys are still struggling
                                 To escape dark night’s
                                        Embrace! 



©Demetrios Trifiatis
6 January 2013

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  1. Date: 1/12/2013 12:29:00 PM

    Great imagery! It even looks rather like a mountain the way the words are shaped.

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/12/2013 1:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you! That was the idea i.e. the mountain shape.
  1. Date: 1/6/2013 6:38:00 AM

    Well written ! - Thanks for your comments and your visit to my last poem. - - oxox // Anne-Lise :)