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A New Love Valve for my Heart

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A New Love Valve for my Heart

I need a new valve
In this little heart of mine
I need a sturdy one
That only lets enough love out
As the amount of love coming in

The valve I have is faulty
For even when love comes in a trickle
It lets out a strong surge of love 
And my little heart gets depleted
Of life giving love 
Leading to....
Heart attacks!
Yes, I suffer heart attacks
That are painful and frightening
The after effects of discomfort
Last such a LONG time
And I wonder….
Will the next one be fatal?

I need a new valve
I MUST get a new valve
Right away!
Before it’s too late!
Or perhaps…..
Perhaps…
I need a new heart?

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  1. Date: 1/14/2013 4:53:00 AM
    I think your Heart is intact my dear, the thing about love is the more we give the more human we become. It certainly has added to your poetic voice.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 1/14/2013 12:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Richard....this means a lot to me. It is hard to feel so deeply. Sometimes I wish I could be more superficial...but...that's just not me! Thanks for the post! :)
  1. Date: 1/9/2013 2:03:00 PM
    Hi Eileen, your write is outstanding, but the reason you wrote it is not. I truly hope everything works out for you. Rollo

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 9:20:00 AM
    very nice ,love hurts like hell and the pain last forever i live it everyday

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 1/8/2013 2:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Kasim...I'm sorry for the pain you are going through. Hope there is an end in sight..if not, just remember, "It's better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all!" Thanks for the post! :)
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 6:12:00 AM
    Same here!I also need the same.Beautiful poem.I think in the first line the word should be VALVE instead of VALUE.Enjoyed your poem.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 1/8/2013 6:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Kash....thanks ever so much for the correction! I so appreciate it! May God strengthen your heart as well! :)
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 4:56:00 AM
    I have been through this tyrannical process many times. The heart has her own rules: Ready to sell a piece of the soul to get her wish. Beautiful, real, human and marvelously deployed! Thank you.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 1/8/2013 5:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Demetrios...you are so kind! Thanks for the lovely post. It is good to know that others have gone through the same predicament. The heart knows no reason. What to do? Hope you have a good day! Hugs!
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 8:25:00 PM
    May your heart be filled with the essence of love always, xxx Rose

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 1/8/2013 5:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for this the lovely wording on this post! It has touched me! Blessings!
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 2:01:00 AM
    Lovely poem!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 1/7/2013 3:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Vesna! Lovely to hear from you! :)
  1. Date: 1/6/2013 7:43:00 PM
    What an angel you are. I pray that God above will give you no more pain than you can bear. I also pray that he fills your heart with endless joy and love for all time. Soup mail.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 1/7/2013 3:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Jon, you are a dear and I'm so encouraged by your posts! Thank you! Soup Mail right back at ya! In fact, I'm such a novice at this that I think I sent you two messages! Happy reading! God bless! :)
  1. Date: 1/6/2013 1:23:00 PM
    If you get it from the Source, you won't be depleted, dear Eileen. He is our unlimited supplier :) Great write!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 1/7/2013 3:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Toquyen...I believe in the SOURCE OF LOVE! He has always been there for me, but sometimes we need to experience these things to be reminded of His unconditional love! :) Thanks for the post!
  1. Date: 1/6/2013 5:39:00 AM
    You have a heart of gold, Eileen. - A good poem, my friend. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 1/6/2013 6:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Anne Lise. You are a dear! <3 :)