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Shadows in the Fog

In the middle of the dark, cloudy day The fog follows out into the grey mist The rolling fog goes around the sharp bend Showing itself to all within the midst Seen are the shadows deep inside the fog Just some dark spaces that disturb the grey No colors are revealed within the dark Just overwhelming presence, where it lays The pitfalls of the dark splotches throughout Leaves one to break into lots of despair Daylight fails to reach into cloudy depths The shadows in the fog bring disrepair
Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 1/11/2013 6:55:00 PM

    nice one Russell ;}

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 3:40:00 PM

    you are writing a lot about the fog lately. Is it happening a lot where you are? I can easily picture the greyness of it from reading this.

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 10:29:00 PM

    Hi Russell, really a great write my friend, really enjoyed the read, great work. Rollo

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 7:58:00 PM

    Very descriptive poem Russell I hope it is no reflection of your cheery disposition, if it is, no worries the sun will soon shine again, take care, sending you some positive vibrations your way xxx I always appreciate your comments on my poetry thank you xxx