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the hawk

hawk in very top
of high Georgia pine..
view unobstructed

hawk catches breeze soars
on a cold clear winter day...
seeks day's last fresh meal

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    Debbie Duncan
    Date: 1/18/2013 3:10:00 PM
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    very nice one Sara,,,, I'm always watching a hawk as I walk 1.3 miles to get my g- daughter from kindergarden school. Then we stop at pet store sometimes. Thank you for reading my Missing Pieces ;}
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    Terry Noack
    Date: 1/11/2013 2:11:00 PM
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    Guess I should study up on poetry styles. :) Beautiful simplicity ... great work!!! And thanks for the comment ..
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    S. K. A. T.
    Date: 1/6/2013 10:50:00 AM
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    wishing the meal is what the hawk will need till the cold comes~ LUV~ SKAT
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    Timothy Jacks
    Date: 1/6/2013 8:22:00 AM
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    Hey you write Haiku preety nice there. I never realized it till now but I like Haiku. The Hawk! He comes around sometimes.
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    Mystic Rose
    Date: 1/6/2013 7:38:00 AM
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    I hear you have lost a loved one, so sorry to hear Sara, hope your poetry will heal you, the hawk is a wonderfully made powerful bird, you describe him so well as you always to with the nature of things, blessings sent your way today, and thoughts of peace for you xxx
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/6/2013 5:00:00 AM
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    A "free" hawk ..... an amazing sight. - Lovely, Sara. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 1/5/2013 5:35:00 PM
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    NIce picturing of the hawk. You must see a lot of wildlife!
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    Toquyen Harrell
    Date: 1/5/2013 1:03:00 PM
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    Cute. Beautiful, Sara. I can see the hawk circling. Great images!
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    Annalise Brigham
    Date: 1/5/2013 12:30:00 PM
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    They are amazing creatures, Sara. I love watching them soar. Enjoyed your Haiku. I pray Doris's family is staying strong and you're doing well. Love, Annalise
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    jack horne
    Date: 1/5/2013 11:31:00 AM
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    love this awesome haiku, my friend
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 1/5/2013 9:39:00 AM
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    This is such a fabulous write my friend! We have hawks where we live and we have to be careful with our little dog being out...we have to be out with him or the hawk could come down and take him! That's really scary! Anyway, your poem is spectacular, I really enjoyed reading it this morning! What a fascinating piece, Great Work!!
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    Jancarl Campi
    Date: 1/5/2013 9:28:00 AM
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    you posted quite a picture here.


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