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VIDEOGAMES

Video games control kids minds
In a lesser way than parents do
Definitely gives a channel for frustration
Extreme aggravation, or even humiliation
Or allows them to explore new world and improve reflexes
Games are just that, they're games
A parents job is to take control and if they don't agree with it
Make your kid play something else. 
Especially when they're adolescents, they need 
Structure. If parents don't provide it then we're all in trouble.

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  1. Date: 5/17/2013 4:45:00 AM

    You've yet to let me down with every click of your different poems, I totally love your work Sharon! great topic choice with multiple perceptions. Much love! -Yours Truly

    Van Buskirk Avatar Sharon Van Buskirk Date: 5/17/2013 5:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Gracias Muchacho! Thanks for coming back ;) Cheers, Sharon
  1. Date: 1/24/2013 2:29:00 PM

    Ok I arterialise my somewhat previous critical remark. Yes that is now added to my vocabulary thinks to the dictionary/theasarus feature on poetrysoup. I do think this is very imformative and straightforward. There is a revealing of the child psychology as well as the parent's psychology. Good job.

    Van Buskirk Avatar Sharon Van Buskirk Date: 5/17/2013 5:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Wayland! I'm not sure what your previous remark was..but regardless, I enjoy all feedback. Good and bad. Without it, well, I wouldn't know if I make a difference. Cheers, Sharon
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 9:49:00 AM

    Sharon, :-) CONGRATULATIONS on a poem well done. Nice exposure in Yasmin's "Video Games Played " extravaganza... take care ~PD

    Van Buskirk Avatar Sharon Van Buskirk Date: 1/20/2013 11:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you :)
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 7:07:00 AM

    awesome write. Congrats friend sharon on your win :)

    Van Buskirk Avatar Sharon Van Buskirk Date: 1/20/2013 11:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for stopping by! :)
  1. Date: 1/18/2013 8:03:00 AM

    Well said, congrats

    Van Buskirk Avatar Sharon Van Buskirk Date: 1/20/2013 11:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Richard! :)
  1. Date: 1/18/2013 7:25:00 AM

    So very true! Congrad's on your thoughtful write winning. Light & Love

    Van Buskirk Avatar Sharon Van Buskirk Date: 1/20/2013 11:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Debbie!
  1. Date: 1/18/2013 3:35:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Sharon Luv xx

    Van Buskirk Avatar Sharon Van Buskirk Date: 1/20/2013 11:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well thank you Mandy! :) Thanks for stopping by
  1. Date: 1/18/2013 3:06:00 AM

    Dear Sharon, thank you for participating and congratulations on your win..

    Van Buskirk Avatar Sharon Van Buskirk Date: 1/20/2013 11:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you! SO glad you enjoyed it :)