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Hearing that heartbeat

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Hearing that heartbeat

Hearing that heartbeat 
Felt shivers from tip to toe
Each kick so welcome
Weaving dreams for my unborn
A mother making process

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  1. Date: 1/14/2013 4:08:00 PM
    Great work expressing the joys and excitement of the expectant mother..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by my work..Your comments were encouraging..Sara

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 2:09:00 AM
    I never thought of a child making a mother, very cool concept. On the day of your child's Birth it would be like you are both Born together.

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 1/6/2013 3:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yes Richard...i hv experienced this process when i had my first baby...all thru the pregnancy ,i wondered wt it is to be a mother...read my poem 'Motherhood' and u will understand my journey into motherhood....:)
  1. Date: 1/5/2013 7:47:00 AM
    Beautiful Irfana if its a true event let me know xx

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 1/6/2013 3:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yep,Mandy u got it rt...its a true event...:)
  1. Date: 1/5/2013 3:08:00 AM
    Glorifying Life in a single verse! Marvelous ! Thank you

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 1/5/2013 10:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks for the cmnt Demetrios...:))
  1. Date: 1/4/2013 8:42:00 PM
    I really like your tanka expressing the feelings of a mother to be.

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 1/5/2013 2:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Andrea...:)