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I Walk The Line


full of emotion, i come barreling sea,to set course, pass wave, releasing its inner- path you have stolid upon me, a daring catch,that eludes dramatically, revealed hunger, to its devouring taste, I bare touch, of loves true limitations, to share my life, with every breath, you breath beyond the waking hour, because I walk the line, that lead me to you, your heart, I love, forever....

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  1. Date: 1/4/2013 1:14:00 PM

    * THIS IS SOOO VERY BEAUTIFUL, SWEET BEAUTIFUL CARMA ~ 'TO SHARE MY LIFE, WITH EVERY BREATH, YOU BREATHE.' ~ I WALK THE LINE, MAKES ME THINK OF JOHNNY CASH AND JUNE CARTER WITHIN THEIR ETERNALS MEANT TO BE LOVE ~ A WONDERFUL MOVIE AND I JUST RECENTLY VIEWED ONE OF HIS LAST MUSIC VIDEOS WHEREIN HE SPOKE OF THE MINUTENESS HE VIEWED TO BE HIS LIFES EMPIRE ? COMPARED UNTO THE LIGHT HE HAD FINALLY FOUND WITHIN HIS PRECIOUS HEART ~ SWEET KISSES, ALWAYS & FOREVER, RACHEL *

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 1/8/2013 8:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, my love, for this line I will walk forever xx Carma
  1. Date: 1/4/2013 12:48:00 PM

    Hi Carma superb love it, happy new year to you, all the best Owen

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 1/8/2013 8:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi big O' thank You much, happy new beginnings to you too this new year 2013 xx Carma