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Closer Than A Kiss

My sweat falls in a pot of bliss
The nectar saps the serpents’ hiss,
Smooth satin sheets sheen with a spark
When daylight dips deep in the dark;
I pull you closer than a kiss.




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  1. Date: 1/29/2013 6:31:00 AM

    amazing poetry Sean...

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 12:35:00 AM

    Sooo very romantic...Charma

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 2:12:00 AM

    Belated congratulations on your winning spot Sean xx

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 7:17:00 PM

    Congratulations, Sean. Love those last two lines!!

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 6:38:00 PM

    Congrad's to a rising star of Poetry Soup. Love, love, loved it! Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 12:39:00 PM

    Wow!Very Romantic!

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 7:46:00 AM

    A dreamy write..Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 7:09:00 AM

    Thanks for reading.