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Sweet whisper

 I feel your breath on my neck
 I feel the warmth of your hands on my hips
 a sweet whisper lingers along the lust of your tounge
 on the edge, desire burns
 knees are weak
 as my heart beats tingling down my spine
 our love becomes intwine..

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  1. Date: 1/10/2013 11:02:00 AM

    Ahem.....lol..Passionate indeed! :o)

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 3:47:00 PM

    Tastefully passionate and sensual! Vivid imagery... explosive language. Well done Kerry!! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 7:18:00 PM

    Yhis might be the one

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 7:06:00 PM

    I love this one Kerry,,, kinda like my " Let Me come Over" ;} thank you for reading. I have used the "breath on my neck line" I wrote one called "dawn of time" along the lines of this one ;}

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 12:06:00 PM

    WoW...Very passionate one!

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 11:04:00 AM

    Who can resist a sweet and romantic poems like this, Kerry .... lovely! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 7:00:00 AM

    VERY SENSUAL PEACE MATE HOW YOU ARE OK AND HAD GOOD CHRISTMAS DID YOU GET MY SOUP MAIL XX DAVDSCOTT