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Best of me

 I feel the love I once had has been sucked out of me
 like water from a cloud, I feel nothing 
 it is not me to hide in the dark with no light to be seen
 but I have given you the best of me
 what have you given me
 I wear my heart on my sleeve & you take advantge 
 but I won't change, not for you 
 today I realise
 I'm not your fool 
 & I don't need you like you think 
 you need me, is what I now see...

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  1. Date: 1/10/2013 10:47:00 AM

    Ooooo..A very strong write. Nice one! :o)

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 6:46:00 PM

    Very powerful words. I have not used poetry to this end in my brief time of writing, but I do find this very powerful.

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 7:10:00 AM

    THEY SAY LOVE IS BLIND i WONDER SHOULD ANYONE WARE THERE HEART ON THERE SLEAVE COOL WRITE AGAIN KEEP THEM COMING XXX DAVIDSCOTT