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Stay Strong Love

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Stay Strong Love

Your strong,
Your beautiful,
Your amazing,
In every way possible.
You don't deserve, to have a 
hospital room on reserve.
You've been there three times, 
don't you see?
It's becoming a place that you 
go and fear,
And you can see your end is 
near.
Don't let it end, don't let it die.
Don't fade away,
Drop that blade,
Grab the first aid,
Help yourself, be strong.
I know you, I know your 
strengths, weaknesses. 
Grab my hand, follow me.
Lets march like a band.
Well take over like sand.
Fight, stay bright. 
Shine over them and show 
them your better, your strong. 
Well get trough this together, 
and forever.

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  1. Date: 1/3/2013 11:52:00 PM
    Nice words of encouragement. Each "your" you have in this poem should be properly presented as either "you're" or "you are". You need apostrophes in "Lets" and "Well"; they should appear as "Let's" and "We'll" respectively. Also, in your next-to-last line, "trough" should be spelled "through". Everything else looks good.