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Enchantment in Disguise

Enhanced by peaceful solitude, in twilight, crimson crowned
There, in tensile grace she stood, enchantment in disguise
Lightly splashed in backlight, where the tender grass had grown

A monumental moment, as she stood before my eyes
First stabbed by startled fear, new trust came pouring down
There, in tensile grace she stood, enchantment in disguise 

Caressed in beauty, and sun embraced, revealed for me alone
Dare I break the silent calm, with breath or just a sigh?
First stabbed by startled fear, new trust came pouring down

A white tailed doe, was grazing there, aware and keen of eye
She perked up ears, alert for sound, yet, still she had not flown
Dare I break the silent calm, with breath or just a sigh?

Or take a step, in chance my foot could rustle twig or loam?
This stance of wills...intense and poised, a fleeting chance to flee
She perked up ears, alert for sound, yet still she had not flown

Eyes made of glass, as windows are, in which the glass is tongue
We made no move...each one transfixed, no air for lungs to breathe
So inter-laced, our spirits crossed, in universal one
Were we exchanged against the sky, beneath the copper trees?


  the snap of a twig
                   breaks the spell of enchantment...
                                        one careless footstep?                       
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 "Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser Poetry Contest"
 of Richard Lamoureux

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  1. Date: 1/12/2013 5:45:00 PM

    Congratulations Carrie......Seren

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 11:53:00 AM

    Carrie, Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 3:48:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Carrie luv xx

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 10:46:00 PM

    Wow this is just beautiful !!! Congratulations on your win in the contest...

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:52:00 PM

    Carrie.. I'm here to offer support In Richard's "Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 7:27:00 PM

    Good job, I enjoyed reading again. Congratulations on 4th place finish. Thanks for entering my contest.

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 8:41:00 PM

    We have a lot of deer around where we live, and I get close to them frequently. I think you did a wonderful job of describing the feeling of being near on of these beautiful creatures. The first line really takes the cake!

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 11:24:00 PM

    So very beautiful, Carrie...a sure winner for Richard's contest! It's so good to see you back! I too was away for awhile...life is so busy and I hate that! I too must thank you for the visit and for your always kind comments and compliments throughout the years we've been in the Soup! My very best wishes for the New Year to you and your family! Love always, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 1:32:00 PM

    How many times this longtime deer hunter witnessed this... I truly could not remember! Something so still and beautiful in the quiet calm, still gets your heart to quicken. You captured it all so splendorly...i can't believe i'm feeling the cold air in my nostrils as I write this!. Always feels so good to come home to YOUR REAL EARTHY POETRY...CARRIE!

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 1:10:00 PM

    A figment of beauty or twigment of your surreal imagination? Just kidding with you! You captured the scenic still in a mystical interlude in Father Time. A beautiful epiphany in your life, and expertly mediated to future generations.