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Murder in the Fog

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Murder in the Fog

On a curved street Fog emanates throughout this place A house sits high To show its prowess and authority Mansion carries a history within And the fog comes And suits the area well Tells of an old story A couple was killed On the grounds of the old house While in a fog They were the town’s beauty king and queen And killed by the one eyed crazy psycho The fog brings the feel Of what it was like that fateful night Quite fearful
Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 1/5/2013 12:25:00 PM

    wow, a one-eyed psycho, lol. Loved this creepy write, Russell

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 9:30:00 AM

    Frightfully fun write Russell! I enjoyed this ominous poetry.

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 2:31:00 AM

    You have created an excellent backdrop for your story. like the 'f's fog, feel, fateful, fearful

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 11:00:00 PM

    Reads like you are describing Gotham City and the murder of Bruce Wayne's parents. That's how Batman became a clandestine crime fighter. Good poem as usual.

    Anderson-Throop Avatar Victoria Anderson-Throop Date: 1/4/2013 2:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oh...i thought i had heard about a one eyed psycho from somewhere..is that it? Batman?
  1. Date: 1/3/2013 10:26:00 PM

    oh! this is like a movie. i am not liking the fog. but, I'm loving your poem:-) ~Luv*SKAT

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 8:36:00 PM

    Hi Russell, what a great thriller write this is my friend. Ron

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 6:58:00 PM

    This give me chills Russell, xxx

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 6:16:00 PM

    hmmm, sounds like it would make a great Stephen King movie, my friend!

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 5:54:00 PM

    the bloody Y their time on earth it was complete, a gruesome death perchance did meet, books now balanced, of 'sow n reap', come up a level Alice. for your receipt, of malice, next time better life to keep, perhaps you earned a palace? re: Russell Sivey, 'Murder in the Fog' Don Johnson