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CHINESE SECRET LOVERS


                               CHINESE SECRET LOVERS

                                      Bold frogs croak 
                                 Garden pond danger watch
                                      Carp smile deep

                                         Lovers halt
                          Frog-beckoned silkworms weave
                                        Worlds vanish



Victoria Anderson-Throop    ©1/3/13

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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 1/6/2013 3:42:00 PM
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    this is very mysterious about those chinese secret lovers with Lots of interesting references to the pond animals!

    Anderson-Throop Avatar Victoria Anderson-Throop Date: 1/6/2013 5:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    chinese poetry is deeply intertwined with setting--and the chinese garden is full of small creatures--including crickets, frogs, grasshoppers, dragonflies....the koi (or carp) are very large--about 12-18 inches...i have lived and worked in china and have a lot of experience in this cultural phenomena.
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    Jermaine Kirimi
    Date: 1/4/2013 3:53:00 AM
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    nice write..just hope ill be able to write in haiku just the way you have...
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    kelly linder
    Date: 1/3/2013 2:28:00 PM
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    Hello,again as she was so special to me.I'm in search of my Soul & Dream Mate,Lover,Wife and Life Companion, christjohn1927@hotmail.com
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    Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/3/2013 9:06:00 AM
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    Nice Haiku Victoria....Seren

    linder Avatar kelly linder Date: 1/3/2013 2:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    you.Actually, you are far away but i don't think that really matters because i had my first date same way and believe i can find that special one out there again as she was so special to me.I'm in search of my Soul & Dream Mate,Lover,Wife and Life Companion, christjohn1927@hotmail.com
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    Ellie Daphne
    Date: 1/3/2013 7:45:00 AM
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    :-) :-) :-) @ what a pond side.......... What a haiku! Ellie Daphne
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    kathryn collins
    Date: 1/3/2013 7:26:00 AM
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    This is a knockout Victoria - "carp smile deep" indeed. What a curiosity. love, Kathy


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