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Wow

January first twenty thirteen
This New Year's first day nearly gone
It is warm, cloudy, unsettled_
Don't know what will be shown

It looks like snow, but much too warm
Coyotes' pups yap in woods
Someone cuts a treee for a fire
The sounds float through greenwoods_

There's an eerie feel in the air
Not sure what it is now
Is it the quiet before the storm
Or the still of day_wow!

Written late January 1, 2013 out on the porch

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  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:48:00 AM

    I like your style :) spontaneous

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 5:23:00 PM

    Where the day takes you, I had thoughts on the first Jan too. nice poem . Thank you for reading Stir of Echoes, was made up. Have a great day Sara ;}

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 12:42:00 PM

    Hi Sara like this surprising day, hope it turned out ok fro you, happy new year, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 6:30:00 PM

    some days are like that. I just hope it does not turn into YOW. Love it, Sara

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 10:16:00 AM

    Let's hope its just another year. Good Wow! Love, Daver

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 3:02:00 AM

    So agree with what Debbie says here, imagery is truly excellent. Wish you a happy and Prosperous New Year, Sara.

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 9:54:00 PM

    Like this,,, the imagery IS AWESOME ;}

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 8:39:00 PM

    Mercy me, Sara...you nailed it!... It's chilly and raining here...cold front coming thru...I really hope it snows...we don't get it much down here...Happy New Year, dear friend - Tim

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 7:41:00 PM

    Hey,hey! I really liked that!.. It made me kind of feel like I was there...And thank you for stopping by.I always appreciate your kindness. :o)

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 6:45:00 PM

    You described it very well, Sara. One can feel the stillness and expecting the storm. Awesome!

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 6:24:00 PM

    Stillness has two edges peace and fear? Nice one Sarah. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 5:25:00 PM

    Stunning poem Sara, I love the way you display such a realistic scenery in your poetry. Love always, Gail

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 4:25:00 PM

    I would like to be sitting there with you to listen..nice poem..made me daydream

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 4:22:00 PM

    This is another fantastic write of yours my friend! I really enjoyed reading this outstanding and fascinating poem this evening! What a enlightening and intriguing piece, Great Work!!

    Atry Avatar Brenda Atry Date: 1/2/2013 4:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Like your doggy!