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A MESSAGE IN A BOTTLE

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A MESSAGE IN A BOTTLE

A new life and new generation has begun,
a fresh start in a new world.
But there are certain things-
time is one,which tests and plays with you
and always changing and never still.
Though its a new phase of time
there are things which remain intact.
let this be a paradise,
where peace and honesty prevails.
A place  where women are secure,
and babies get their share of love,
 and treat nature as our own mother
with utmost care and respect.
Never bargain inner peace and love
for money and luxuries.
cherish the golden hearts of the people
and do not be harsh by the tongue.
Make it a place more beautiful than heaven
where even gods long/desire to descend .

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  1. Date: 2/3/2014 7:50:00 PM
    I would love to see this in all the world. A GREAT message in a bottle this is.

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 2/7/2014 2:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much for reading.
  1. Date: 3/14/2013 11:59:00 AM
    This is so beautiful my friend! Life is made up of many chapters... birth, as a young child, a teenager, a newly wed, children, success in the business world, advancing years, and best time of all... retirement! If you're one of the lucky ones like me, each chapter is a hoot! Nice poem... hugs, Jack

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 3/14/2013 10:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much :). life in itself is beautiful when going through different phases.
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 10:13:00 AM
    simple but beautiful poem thanks for sharing.

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 2/7/2013 6:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you :)