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  1. Date: 5/9/2013 7:45:00 AM

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 6:03:00 PM
    Lovely. I can kind of relate. That's how I felt when my daughter was in a coma many years ago. Thankfully, she survived and is still with us today.

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 1:24:00 AM
    Great poem and great husband!

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 4:07:00 PM
    DAvid, it's so hard to believe someone could be living without smell OR taste. ARe you able to enjoy many foods at all? I would think it would help you lose weight. I can't see being interested in food if it has no taste! Can you imagine having NO senses any more? we would all surely die because we would not be able to see what the heck we were doing!

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 2:29:00 PM
    I hope this means she is better. RA is a stinky disease.

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 8:53:00 AM
    Touching piece from a loving soul... Wishing you both a peaceful happy new year... Michael

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 8:37:00 AM
    Did she make a full recovery? Soup mail.

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 3:12:00 AM
    This is an incredibly positive write and perhaps the good vibrations that your feelings ooze from this write helped her recover. Great work and great form too.

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 4:17:00 PM
    Beautiful love and faith! I hope that Geraldine is well and everything is good, David. Your belief will help her to be stronger. Love ya, Toquyen

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 2:50:00 PM
    great title and very heartfelt!

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 1:33:00 PM
    A very sentimental feeling after reading the bottom note Mr David, blessing to your heart. *LUV~SKAT

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 12:59:00 PM
    Good poem. God bless - JH

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 12:56:00 PM
    GOOD one and I am glad she awoke from that state, David!! Hope the new year is treating you splendidly so far.

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 12:41:00 PM
    beautiful tribute to Geraldine, my friend - thanks for your kindness

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 11:43:00 AM
    Excellent work! I hope your wife is doing much better now. Happy new year. -- Sean

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 11:27:00 AM
    This is quite the powerful write my friend! I am amazed by the wonderment of this incredible and strong poem! David, you have delighted me by this tremendous piece! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 7:43:00 AM
    Very powerful words penned David, I am sure it was the reason for her recovery, to be by your side and love you, thank you for sharing this personal gem, you show incredible strength here and it is a testimony to a beautiful union. may blessings fall upon both of you, xxx Rose