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Is it a fantasy

Michael Dom Avatar Michael Dom - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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Is it a fantasy

If I give my love to you
And this is no fantasy
Promise me you will be true

Darling why are you so blue
Don’t deny your ecstasy
When I give my love to you

After all that we’ve been thru
Don’t give up so easily
Promise me you will be true

Our love we can renew
Cast away your misery
When I give my love to you

Sometimes we may go askew
But our ship will sail this sea
If we both will remain true

Friends and lovers are too few
But this is no fantasy
If I give my love to you
Promise me you will be true

Someone tell me
If it’s easy being
A lover and a friend?

This is a villanelle with a questionku.

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  1. Date: 2/5/2014 3:44:00 AM

    Congrats on your poetic work of a "Villanelle with a questionku", Michael. 7 G.

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 6:40:00 PM

    Actually this is not a terzanelle so I'll have to remove it from Richard Lamoureux competition.

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 5:18:00 AM

    not all the time MICHAEL,sometimes the road gets a little ruff,but with love you will conquer,great write

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom Date: 1/3/2013 6:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    cheers Richard.
  1. Date: 1/2/2013 7:48:00 AM

    Interesting.