Sky Is As Black As Ink by Connie Gildersleeve

The sky is black as ink, storms brewing sitting in the dark. Hypnotizing effect, my eyelids closing in a trance like state. A candle I did light, glowing, penning ink into words. For Rick Parise's Sijo Contest

James Fraser

Date: 1/24/2013 1:19:00 PM

The creation of natures power on the poets peripheral, allowing the poets power to create on the peripheral of natures power. Fine Sijo Connie, sure allows the readers thoughts to image within :)

Connie Gildersleeve Date: 1/24/2013 1:36:00 PM

Thanks James for your wonderful comment. And I did my job for the readers, provoking ing thoughts. Warm Smiles, Connie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/7/2013 7:49:00 AM

Reads like a winner ..Enjoyed reading your very creative work this morn..Sara

Connie Gildersleeve Date: 1/7/2013 8:44:00 AM

Thanks Sara for your comment and stopping by. Have a nice day. Warm Smiles, Connie

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 1/7/2013 2:39:00 AM

Beautiful image!

Connie Gildersleeve Date: 1/7/2013 6:38:00 AM

Thank you Vesna for your comment and for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 1/6/2013 6:30:00 PM

Lovely poem Connie. Keep the poems flowing from your pen.

Connie Gildersleeve Date: 1/7/2013 6:46:00 AM

Thanks Jon for your comment and for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie

Anne Lise Andresen

Date: 1/6/2013 6:42:00 AM

After the storm ..... comes the sun. Very well written,Connie. - I like it. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Connie Gildersleeve Date: 1/7/2013 6:48:00 AM

Thanks Anne for your lovely comment. Warm Smiles, Connie

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/3/2013 9:43:00 AM

It went through my heart like the spear of ZEUS! WOW! Love it!

Connie Gildersleeve Date: 1/3/2013 1:22:00 PM

Thank you DT for your comment. I happy you like it. Warm Smiles Connie

Richard Palmer

Date: 1/3/2013 5:14:00 AM

nice write Connie,don't get bad eyes,lol

Connie Gildersleeve Date: 1/3/2013 1:23:00 PM

Thanks Richard for your comment.Thanks for stopping by. Already have bad eyes. It comes with old age. Warm Smiles, Connie

S. K. A. T.

Date: 1/2/2013 3:27:00 PM

Connie, a deep and awesome image*LUV~SKAT

Connie Gildersleeve Date: 1/3/2013 4:56:00 AM

Thank you Skat for you comment. Warm Smiles, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2013 11:42:00 AM

Very descriptive lines to show us the feeling and mood of your writing by candlelight!

Connie Gildersleeve Date: 1/2/2013 1:19:00 PM

Thank you Andrea for your comment. I've never wrote a Sijo poem before and I wasn't sure about the second line. Warm Smiles, Connie

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/1/2013 2:37:00 PM

I can see this poem being penned...in fact it would be this very poem here is what I would envision! This is a tremendous write my friend! I truly loved reading this incredible poem this afternoon Connie! What a powerful piece, one of complete delight! Great Work!!

Connie Gildersleeve Date: 1/1/2013 5:26:00 PM

Thank you for you wonderful comment. I've only been writing poems four months. Trying new styles of poems. I did research on this style but I still wasn't sure if incorporated all elements that are required for a Sijo. Warm Smiles, Connie

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