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Sorry For The First Fight 2013

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Sorry For The First Fight 2013

Nervous in my sleep
Passed the year with boiling heart
Pushed down the anger

Hide in detention
Feel moody in the morning
I know you are mad

Feel sorry to hear
The things you try not to say
But slipped already

We drown on emo
But hurry stood on our sane
Forgave each other

I'm glad it was you
Person who chased on my days
The love of my life

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  1. Date: 1/7/2013 5:30:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading this morn..I am glad that I chose this one..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/7/2013 6:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sara, glad to have you here :D
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 5:01:00 AM
    Mighty fine Haiku here... You have penned it very well. This one is near textbook Haiku..... Jake

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/7/2013 6:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hehe, thanks Jake, cute comment :D
  1. Date: 1/3/2013 11:44:00 AM
    well, it sounds like you MADE UP and that is marvelous. I too enjoyed that last haiku the most!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/3/2013 5:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank hou Andrea, the last line is also my favourite too :D
  1. Date: 1/2/2013 9:35:00 AM
    Well penned Yanny! It's always wise to resolve issues quickly so that peace and harmony can be maintained. Nicely done!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/3/2013 5:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Viky, i have the same thoughts as you :D -hug, yanny
  1. Date: 1/2/2013 8:23:00 AM
    Very nice haiku; Thanks for sharing with us. happy new Year. Lucilla

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/2/2013 8:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Luci :D happy new year too :D
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 8:38:00 PM
    I love your 3rd Haiku. The way you have expressed this common faux pas is priceless. Bravo!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/1/2013 8:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jon, it's a pleasure to have a visit by you :) happy new year :D
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 8:08:00 PM
    Did not know a Haiku could be that long.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/1/2013 8:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No, actually haiku is only 3 lines, this just like the chains of haiku, a little modification of it :)
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 12:26:00 PM
    Glad you said sorry so quick, pity about the fight though xx

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/1/2013 4:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Glad that we never took the fight so long, and regrets why happened in the night of new year eve :p