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Caught in the sun

I, seated on the white scorching sand
Of the Brighton beach,
With eyes fixed in a bizarre hallucinatory dream
Of your frosty amatory lips and bronzed skinny body
Am caught in the sun.


Written for Andrea Dietrich's Contest
01.01.13

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  1. Date: 1/2/2013 9:02:00 AM

    Beautifully written Chuma! The sun has a way of intensifying images in our minds. Very nice!

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 2:38:00 PM

    very lovely! good luck in the contest and happy new year!

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 9:29:00 AM

    This is good. Happy New Year!

    Okonkwo Avatar Chuma Okonkwo Date: 1/1/2013 10:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Chris... Happy New Year.... Cheers.