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The Clue

I, me. my, mine
Is so selfish
It does not shine 

We, our, your, you
It is happiness
It is the clue

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    S. K. A. T.
    Date: 5/1/2013 3:09:00 PM
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    I don't know but I super love this.~SKAT
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    John Posey
    Date: 3/15/2013 4:08:00 PM
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    cleverly crafted and loaded with wisdom. Brevity need not be witless.... great job..... Jake
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    Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 1/10/2013 12:38:00 PM
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    A profound poem. Beautifully wrapped. Thanks for sharing. ... Love,Mehnaz
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    david scott
    Date: 1/10/2013 11:01:00 AM
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    SHORT AND SWEET WELL SAID XXDAVIDSCOTT
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    Rollo West
    Date: 1/7/2013 9:32:00 PM
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    Hi Vesna What a great write this, and very appropriate. Thank you also for stopping by and reading my write. Rollo
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    Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 1/7/2013 12:23:00 PM
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    Enjoyed your wonderful write Vesna, thank you for your comment on mine, happy new year love Elizabeth
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    Owen Yeates
    Date: 1/7/2013 11:37:00 AM
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    Hi Vesna absolutrly right, people should be less selfish and maybe the world would be a better place nicely put, all the best Owen
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    Susan Palli
    Date: 1/7/2013 9:18:00 AM
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    Love it!
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    kash poet
    Date: 1/7/2013 9:10:00 AM
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    So profound write in just 6 lines!Love this!Thanks for visiting my page.
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    Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 1/7/2013 6:36:00 AM
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    Vespa a great message you wrote in this rhyme. Nicely done. So often we think too much about I, Me, Mine instead of You, We. Warm Smiles, Connie
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    Rachel St.Cross
    Date: 1/7/2013 4:59:00 AM
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    ‡ Your Lovely Heart's Wonderful Poem Is Still Glowing In Beauty, Sweet Beautiful Vesna ˜ Just Passing By To Say, 'Thank You,' For Your Priceless Treasures Kind Warm Visit; Forever A Joy ˜ Stay Beautiful And I Hope That Your New Year Is Is Caressing Your Tender Heart Amid The Most Magnificent Of Love ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *
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    Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/7/2013 3:07:00 AM
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    Great idea :D sharing is part of hapiness :D, I agree with that
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    elizabeth wesley
    Date: 1/3/2013 6:04:00 AM
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    You nailed it in the right place. We need to get out of ourselves.
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 1/1/2013 10:25:00 AM
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    Lovely thought, sweet Vesna!! and Happy New Year to you!
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    Rachel St.Cross
    Date: 1/1/2013 8:32:00 AM
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    ‡ Hey Girl, Where Has Your Beauty Been ? Tis Good To See You Again, Sweet Beautiful Vesna ˜ I Agree With Your Precious Heart's Bright Light Clue; Not About me But All About, YOU ˜ 'Happy New Year.' My Love, Always, Rachel *
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    Sukmawati Komala
    Date: 1/1/2013 7:49:00 AM
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    Happy new year dear Vesna...will follow your clue ..very nicely done !!!! <3<3<3 luv SK
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 1/1/2013 6:03:00 AM
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    Well, for some reason I, me, my, mine is human nature..Enjoyed reading this morning..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/1/2013 5:37:00 AM
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    Yes....true, Vesna. - Very nice poem, and well written. - 2013 is here! - May it be a good year!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Ahsan Khalid
    Date: 1/1/2013 4:47:00 AM
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    A short but meaning full
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    Richard Palmer
    Date: 1/1/2013 3:47:00 AM
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    wonderful write Vesna,so very true,happy new year
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 1/1/2013 3:28:00 AM
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    This is so true Vesna abd so nice and a Happy New Year to oyu love xx


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