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Listen To The Unsaid

 
"Because I Love You."
 

     Because I love you
      together, we could
       sleep on our bed head to head,
          listen to the unsaid 
            light the flame without a name.
                                                    
Because I love you
together, we could 
   pretend its real
     listen to the unsaid 
        blow the snow & steal the wind.
                   
Because I love you
together, we could
   dream and scream 
      listen to the unsaid
         when resting in our nest.
                  
Because I love you
together, we could 
    watch the tide 
       listen to the unsaid
         while sitting side by side.
                  
Because I love you
together, we could
     be from the very few
           listen to the unsaid
                  as we only knew.
                        
Because I love you
together, we could
    hold hands just stand,
         listen to the unsaid
             then dance to the band.
                     
                                          I Will Always Love You
                                                     Together. 
                                                              . 2/6/2013
                                                             By. Therese Bacha
                                                              

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  1. Date: 2/17/2013 4:38:00 PM

    Congrats, Therese. Nice going. xxxRalph

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 2/18/2013 8:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Ralph, have a wonderful day...Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 2/17/2013 4:04:00 PM

    Therese, congrats on your super win in PD's contest luv. Hugs and luv, Gail

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 2/18/2013 8:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Gail...i do appreciate your passing by...its so sweet of you, hope u feel better with your neighbor......Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 2/17/2013 2:09:00 PM

    It's true love when all the small things are the important ones..congratulations

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 2/17/2013 2:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Donna, so nice of you to drop by....we are so lucky to have each other....have a nice evening....Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 2/17/2013 4:43:00 AM

    - A beautiful Valentines poem, it had to win Terry! - CONGRATULATIONS!! - Have a beautiful Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 2/17/2013 5:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Anne, so nice of you as usual to think of me......thank you, you to have a great Sunday Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 2/17/2013 2:17:00 AM

    congratulations on your win...

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 2/17/2013 5:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Mehnaz, i really do appreciate your passing by......have a great Sunday.Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 2/16/2013 9:33:00 PM

    Congratulations my dear friend Therese for your very sweet write and super win! I enjoyed reading your great Valentines poem! love/hugs, Leonora

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 2/16/2013 10:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Leonora, thank you my dear, so happy you liked it.....i hope you had a nice Valentine yourself.....Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 2/16/2013 6:43:00 PM

    congrats on your win Theresa

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 2/16/2013 8:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Joseph....so nice of you to drop by......Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 2/16/2013 4:13:00 PM

    Congrats on your wonderful win, Terry! Love, Kim

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 2/16/2013 10:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Kim, so nice of you to pass by.....Love Terry..xoxo
  1. Date: 2/16/2013 4:11:00 PM

    Very sweet poem, I am sure she loved it.congrats!

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 2/16/2013 8:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Richard thank you so much for caring.... i needed that as i was in and out of emergency lately..but today with the new medication i am back....thank you so much..Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 2/16/2013 2:59:00 PM

    Congratulations on your very fine win, Theresa! It is very lovely!

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 2/16/2013 8:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank yo Annalise so nice of you to drop by......i wish you all the best.....Love Terry
  1. Date: 2/16/2013 2:09:00 PM

    Hi Terry, CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your lovely and wonderful poem. always & forever *LINDA

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 2/16/2013 8:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank yo so much Linda.....i had decided to take a break as i was in and out of emergency lately,,,,,,but now i feel good with the new medication....Thank yo again Linda so much.....Love Terry xoxoxo
  1. Date: 2/16/2013 1:41:00 PM

    Love the words, Love the format....and layout...just beautifully done!!

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 2/16/2013 8:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Carrie, thank you i am so encouraged by all of you standing by my side......i was sick lately......but today i feel much better....i had decided to take a break form writing...but i feel great now.....Love Terry
  1. Date: 1/30/2013 5:47:00 AM

    Terry; This is very romantic and I loved it. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 1/30/2013 6:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Lucy.....hope you are doing fine.....have a wonderful day....Love Terry xoxoxo
  1. Date: 1/14/2013 6:01:00 PM

    Congrats ....Seren

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 1/14/2013 6:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much.....yes i was so happy...xoxo Terry
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 7:56:00 PM

    Congrats! ~SKAT

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 1/13/2013 8:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much.....you encouraged me to continue writing.......thank you. Terry
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 6:34:00 PM

    Therese, a very romantic image. ;-) Congratulations with your lovely poem. In Mystic Rose' "Be My Valentine" contest. Always~ PD

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 1/13/2013 7:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you PD.....yes i was happy and surprised.......take care Love Terry
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 3:00:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 1/13/2013 3:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You Debbie so much......thank for always visiting my site.......And for choosing my poem......Love Terry
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 1:15:00 PM

    I can feel the emotions of love in every line, and the flow is very graceful! Great write and much congrats :)

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 1/13/2013 1:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne, you always lift my moral with your kind words.....Love Terry
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 11:21:00 AM

    Congrats Therese on your placement and thank you for joining my contest xxx

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 1/13/2013 1:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much for choosing my poem....I am honored for joining your contest.....i am so happy....Love Terry
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 10:31:00 AM

    Wonderful form and verse Therese--many congrats!

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 1/13/2013 1:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much for your kind words....Terry
  1. Date: 1/10/2013 1:46:00 PM

    Liked the form and content of this Pleased to have visited today.."

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 1/10/2013 2:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nice compliment coming from you Joe.....see you later..xoxo Terry
  1. Date: 1/9/2013 3:18:00 PM

    the unsaid speaks no words come through, what isnt said could make you blue, instead

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 1/9/2013 4:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Love the way you answered back in a poetry form.......whoa your good.....Thank you Don.........Terry
  1. Date: 1/4/2013 10:49:00 AM

    Built and flowed beautifully. Touching poem and description of a moment. You are very talented.

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 1/4/2013 10:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Whoa Carol thank yo so much.....your comments gives me courage....xoxoxo Terry
  1. Date: 1/4/2013 9:09:00 AM

    I love this one! Simple rhyme but described everything, gorgeous one Terry, i'm going to fave this one :) - hug, yanny

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 1/4/2013 9:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yanny..thank you so much for visiting my poems......you encouraged me to continue writing...xoxoxo Terry
  1. Date: 1/3/2013 4:32:00 PM

    They said when you can be silent with someone, that is when you know you are in intimacy with that person. Love it, dear Therese. Enjoyed your write :)

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 1/3/2013 4:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much.....i love it when important writers like you read my poem and like it......Happy New Year........Terry
  1. Date: 1/2/2013 3:14:00 PM

    Therese, together gets it all done the best way*LUV~SKAT

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 1/2/2013 3:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Whoa Whoa i am thrilled to have had the opportunity that YOU would read my poem .......Happy New Year..and thank you so much......xoxoxo Terry
  1. Date: 1/2/2013 7:54:00 AM

    Terry...lovely poem! The unsaid is often more powerful than the said! ;) I'd love to hear the unsaid with you!

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 1/2/2013 10:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Eileen thanks again...you are so warm in your comments......we will stay in touch....xoxo Terry
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 9:58:00 AM

    Very cool the way you did this, like waves on the page. The words seem to float off the page. I really enjoyed your words, great job!

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 1/1/2013 10:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Happy New Year.....thank you so much Richard......i loved reading your support.Terry
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 3:39:00 AM

    Wishing you a Happy New Year. And a lifetime of happiness.

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 1/1/2013 9:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You.......Best wishes to you to....a lifetime of writing and happiness.... Terry