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The Hill And The Mountain

The hill is covered in 'oar's frost
The mountain in foggy mist
The Japanese Maple's buds pop
Spring it says still exist

The earth has gone in its orbit
Changing the position
Of the sun, 'til it reached stop
Its boundary condition

A condition set by our God  

Unfinished for now...

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  1. Date: 1/1/2013 3:09:00 AM

    Nice poetry Sara. Do hope you had a wonderful Christmas! Thanks for your kind remarks. I haven't been on this website for a very long time. Happy New Year! Love, Maureen

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 12:52:00 AM

    Beautiful poem! Dear Sara, I wish you a happy New Year filled with all that is beautiful!

  1. Date: 12/31/2012 5:25:00 PM

    I love what you have done so far my friend! Very eloquent and wondrously special! If I don't get a chance to write a comment to you before the new year, I want to wish you a very Happy New Year Sara! I have enjoyed this poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/31/2012 5:09:00 PM

    Hallelujah Sara, Glory to his name and May God bless abundantly you, his Hand-maiden; & a happy new year.."