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I'm IN IT

I’m in it
Oh boy, I am in trouble, but it wasn’t really my fault
My friend provided the cross bow, and I slipped in the bolt
It was when we took it out to play, then the trouble was done
We pulled the trigger slowly, it was only meant in fun 
The bolt it left the bow, and it smashed into the post
That’s when it hit and freed an inconsequential invisible ghost
It crept out from obscurity and stepped in between us two
But it didn’t count on the strength of friendship, that I have for you
We rounded up the posse and even though we may be twits
They all got behind us and they helped remove  the little s***.
©  ~GG~31/12/2012

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  1. Date: 1/2/2013 12:25:00 PM

    LOL, I love your sense of humour, Mandy - thanks for always making me laugh : )

  1. Date: 12/31/2012 10:40:00 AM

    Hi Mandy, really great, got a big chuckle out of it. Rollo

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/31/2012 11:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Rollo xx
  1. Date: 12/31/2012 7:47:00 AM

    hey this is different, wow shouldn't play with those,, good poem like it....soup mail

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/31/2012 11:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    no won't play again lol xx
  1. Date: 12/31/2012 6:06:00 AM

    ha, Mandy you should have stuck with Barbie...David

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/31/2012 6:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ha I 'll get into trouble if I say I'd rather play with Ken, its that naughty welsh piece getting me into trouble lol xx