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Blanket of Stardust

Stardust confetti from majestic emerald skies
Pouring from God's heart and the mystery in his eyes

Covering with adoration, its beauty comes from grace
It bares the heavenly glow that illuminates his face

Magical elements encompass each speck of dust
Answered prayers attached from a god whose gifts are just

God also sprinkles stardust to show that he is blessed
Radiant particles from golden clouds each time a sin’s confessed 	 

12-30-12


Written especially for Gail Doyle’s Contest- Blanket of Stardust


(Today was my parents’ wedding anniversary. So thankful they are both in heaven!)

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  1. Date: 4/15/2013 8:21:00 PM

    Hi Gwen, such magic in stardust and you place it where it will do the most good. So enjoyed the depth of your thought! LOve, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 5:36:00 PM

    I do a lot of the last line Cyndi, is that why I can't see, so many particles! This makes me feel I need to smarten up.l How are you anyhoo? Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 8:30:00 AM

    'gwen, thanks for taking the time to see several of my latest poems. I miss you so much!! Please email me from time to time, would you? Luv, Andrea (I hope our project is still on the back burner for ya.)

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 1:58:00 PM

    Well written Gwendolen; well done and enjoyed

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 2:58:00 PM

    Yes, dear, the poem could very well have been about YOU, the perfect mom for sure. Please email me and tell me what's up!!!! gotta rush to P.O. now and send family valentine poems out. I'm late of course for valentine's day. Luv, andrea

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 4:53:00 PM

    This is a very nice poem for God ,,, very nice;}

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 2:00:00 PM

    Beautiful :) You have created some stunning imagery here. Wonderful job!

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 9:03:00 AM

    this is beautiful, Gwen,, the passion comes through in evert word every stanza...

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 7:45:00 PM

    So beautiful !!! Both my parents are in Heaven also...miss them terribly !! I love the idea of stardust sprinkled when a sin is confessed and answered prayers !!

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 6:12:00 AM

    Amazingly written. This poem really touched my heart Gwendi .. Good day :)

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 6:08:00 AM

    Just beautiful Gwen!Enjoyed very much.Wishing you all the best in this New Year.

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 5:53:00 AM

    Wonderful inspiration in this magical verse Gwen. It uplifts and seems to give strength just reading it. P S Did you get my email? Love, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 7:55:00 AM

    Bringing in God's heart and sins confessed , you have done a great job with this poem. It will do well for sure in the contest. Have a wonderful new year, dear :) Jag

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 7:01:00 PM

    wonderful write Gwen..happy new year

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 9:29:00 AM

    Skilled write. I especially like the first couplet because of the strong imagery there. I hope this one does well for you in the contest. Have a wonderful new year!

  1. Date: 12/31/2012 2:25:00 PM

    and I have no one here to help me know how to scan a picture and put Razzmatazz on FB. I really want to show her off. Hopefully when my nephew comes one day.

  1. Date: 12/31/2012 2:24:00 PM

    You made your entry "angelic" Gail is gonna swoon!!! And about your suggestion for an avatar, Gwen,I am afraid to ever change my avatar because I like how mine is and am not sure how to change back to it if I try a different one. I had to do some kind of reduction in a picture at Facebook or something just to get the one I have right now.

  1. Date: 12/31/2012 1:44:00 PM

    How beautiful this is !!! and such a lovely dedication to your parents, and the day they were wed. Under a star-dusted sky perhaps? Thank you for your many kindnesses...and a Happy New Year dear Gwen!

  1. Date: 12/31/2012 6:26:00 AM

    Gwen, just love it, beautiful, have a happy and peaceful New year mucker...David

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 11:31:00 PM

    You have written another gem with this incredible write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening and faithful poem this evening! What a powerful message for us to see, a wondrous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 6:43:00 PM

    This is a remarkable poem and a great tribute to their memory, they had an amazing woman, their probably smiling proud from heaven dear Gwen, so glad to read your work again I missed you Happy New Year, xxx love