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Banned Life

Just Stepped in a world,
That got some crazy curls.
Don't know anyone,
Have got no place to run.
Gotta make a plan,
To open my luck which is ban.
Just come and save me from this crazy syndrome.
Please! have some sympathy,
On poor souls of me and thee.
Gonna have a escape from here,
Look there's a door way there.
Oh! no it's a dead end,
Have got my life banned.

My first poem on this community hope you like it !!

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  1. Date: 1/15/2013 7:40:00 AM

    Thanks alot! Your comment really gave me a new spirit to write more poems .

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:52:00 PM

    great poem Hira nice job being featured

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 2:04:00 PM

    Hira :-) your poem has been a wonderful write to find on the soups front page... '"Congratulations"" with your awesome featured poem of the week... always~ LINDA