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Daisy Pines

What I was once I'll never be again
For too long I've stood open under sun
  I peeked at dawn with eyes that shone brightly
  And bloomed full unto perfection, then stood
  Gazing firm into mid-day's scorching glare
  Though I grew weary, my vigor wilting,
Twas evening's light that brought me sweet respite
And I gave way to slumber this good night.

TLH   ©  12-30-2012

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  1. Date: 2/7/2013 2:03:00 PM

    Very, very nice. Thank you.

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 1:22:00 PM

    Flows beautifully... added greatly to poem.

  1. Date: 1/25/2013 9:23:00 AM

    After reading your gentle words, I feel at peace! SWEET! Hugs, Jack xox

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 4:34:00 PM

    a beautiful romantacized write on the daisy pine. This is a delight!

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 1:24:00 PM

    You were the Daisy Pine !! Great personification !! Enjoyed !!

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 8:20:00 AM

    Wow, I have forgotten the beauty of your poetry my friend! I truly love this this incredible and wondrous write Tanya! You write so illustriously and with such beautiful tenderness! I really enjoyed reading this emotional poem this morning! What a powerful and outstanding piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 7:44:00 AM

    A beautiful personification of flowers A great comparison to aging, thank you for sharing your poem Tanya, Happy New Year and blessings sent your way today, xxx