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Tasting Bliss

Closer now, your breath in my hair,
Leaning in for our first kiss.
Touch of lips, too exquisite to bear.
Now, at last, tasting bliss.
My breathing and heartbeat, both amiss.






28/12/2012
for Andrea's contest

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  1. Date: 1/9/2013 8:54:00 AM

    This SUCH a sweet poem. Congrats :)

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 2:33:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win, Francine.

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 1:58:00 AM

    Belated congratulations on your winning spot Francine xx

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 6:18:00 PM

    Such romance Francine! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 6:08:00 PM

    Congratulations with this romantic poem, Francine. I am finding my top winners . At least I can do that until the entire list gets posted. Yours makes me sigh!

  1. Date: 12/31/2012 3:58:00 PM

    Happy New Year Francine good luck in the contest Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/31/2012 2:22:00 PM

    No better taste Francine, and this delightfully warm poem of love so allows the reader to Asp to taste. Good luck in Andrea's contest. May I also take the time to wish you 'Happy New Year' xxxx

  1. Date: 12/31/2012 1:33:00 PM

    Ahhh!!Romantic and passion packed...Thanks for stopping by and letting me know of errors..Sara

  1. Date: 12/31/2012 11:36:00 AM

    short of breath,double beat,lol,great write Francine

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 11:11:00 PM

    I have been so frustrated but I am now in your contest. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 9:06:00 AM

    this is lovely!