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Understepping Poem Two

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Below is the poem entitled Understepping Poem Two which was written by poet Richard Lamoureux. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Understepping Poem Two

Will you see what I want you to see?
Maybe you won't play my little game
Some will find this doesn't make much sense
Still if the hidden diamond is found
There will be a message you can see
Step down once each line below to read

New form
To find underlying line
Read first word first line
Second word second line
Third word third line
Forth word forth line
Fifth word fifth line
Sixth word sixth line

All lines are nine sylables including stepping line.

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  1. Date: 1/13/2013 8:52:00 AM
    A new form with secret codes! How fun! Now I will have to do one myself.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/13/2013 9:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That would be great, I anxiously await
  1. Date: 1/3/2013 12:38:00 PM
    this is new to me and interesting...liked it..:)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/13/2013 9:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am glad you liked it Irfana. Give it a try.
  1. Date: 12/27/2012 5:28:00 PM
    Done again :D try to check mine, i did it properly this time :D

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 12/27/2012 6:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sure with my pleasure, i can't wait to see:D
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/27/2012 6:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Yanny, I checked out and you get an A+ I would love to post the Joint one I modified but only with your permission. I quite like it as well.